Unfinished opening

This is the opening to our film so far, the foley still needs improving and titles need adding.

Problems with sound

I have had many problems with creating the sound for our piece, mostly down to my inexperience in creating sound effects and music for this medium, however also down to poor organisation, ultimately all of the problems I am facing fall onto my shoulders. 
 Problems I have been facing are that I have not been able to record live sound effects, meaning I have to download sound effects online and use these, this is okay apart from the fact not all can be found and so there are huge chunks missing in the audio of our piece. Also I am not experienced in the task of creating audio, and although I have created tracks on garageband that I would have liked to use in the piece none of them fit the mood and i have found it hard to create the right atmosphere, however I am determined to give the piece an audio track that is fitting to its subject.